the man in black

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the man in black

couplet

ode to a healthy relationship

it does not matter
which panties
i wear

.

ode to a broken relationship

it does not matter
which panties
i wear
 



Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 at 10:20 am | | Leave a comment | Add to Memories | Tell a Friend

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[info]viruswshoes

I like this very much.
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 05:28 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]josh_zero

:)
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 05:33 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]borggrrl

Indeed.
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 05:37 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]nipplesontoast

nod to the underwear shape of the poems. :)
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 05:51 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]danarama

Thong you for noticing that too!
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 06:14 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Thread | Reply

[info]theryk

one haiku, two contexts:
a textbook example
of conservation
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 05:58 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]stefan11

unsure whether a question can be an ode

does it ever matter
which pantiues
I wear
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 06:00 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]mokitty

LOL

How true.
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 06:10 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]danarama

Can I play?

Brilliant!!!


ode the the beginning of a relationship

i got no sleep
and never got out
of bed

ode the the end of a relationship

i got no sleep
and never got out
of bed


Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 06:18 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]postmaudlin

Re: Can I play?

Brilliant!!!
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 07:12 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Thread | Reply

[info]dykestar

HAHAHAHAHA! Omg, this is so true!
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 06:27 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]mskittieface

I love you.
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 06:30 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]colubra

I like.

One thing I found interesting here- and was a gender-preference assumption-based thing- was that I figured in the first instance this was in the 'getting up and putting on our clothes' situation, which only made the flip-flop a little more jarring.
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 06:34 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]abostick59

So for what sort of relationship does it matter which panties one wears?

Edited at 2008-09-08 07:49 pm (UTC)
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 07:48 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]zanyassmask

that's pretty great
Posted on Sep. 8th, 2008 11:34 pm (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]serazin

So good!
Posted on Sep. 9th, 2008 12:46 am (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]sfgabe

lol love it.

By the time you swear you're his,
Shivering and sighing,
And he vows his passion is
Infinite, undying -
Lady, make a note of this:
One of you is lying.
Posted on Sep. 9th, 2008 06:01 am (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]sfgabe

(dorothy parker again - it seemed appropo)
Posted on Sep. 9th, 2008 06:02 am (UTC) | | Parent | Thread | Reply

[info]deep_in_earth

But does it matter
who wears the panties?
Posted on Sep. 10th, 2008 05:26 am (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]mollena

Also....









HAPPY BIRTHDAY [info]postmaudlin 
Posted on Sep. 10th, 2008 07:26 am (UTC) | | Thread | Reply

[info]postmaudlin

Re: Also....

THANK YOU! Will we see you friday?
Posted on Sep. 10th, 2008 01:59 pm (UTC) | | Parent | Thread | Reply